Hi Alayze, I really like the way you have structured your story it has a clear beginning middle and end. Are the peasants the bad people? What made the so bad? Was it because they had no money or food? If so should they really be destroyed? I like the descriptive words you have used. I would love to hear a bit more about your story. From Mrs Carruthers
Hi Alayze, I really like the way you have structured your story it has a clear beginning middle and end. Are the peasants the bad people? What made the so bad? Was it because they had no money or food? If so should they really be destroyed? I like the descriptive words you have used. I would love to hear a bit more about your story.
ReplyDeleteFrom Mrs Carruthers